A world without grades

By: Aariz Ihsan, Ian Delpha, Samuel Richardson, Colden Grossman and Danielle D’Aiuto

Octavia Butler’s fiction short story “Bloodchild”, explores the themes of power dynamics, sacrifice, and the quest for a livable habitat in an alien world. The narrative unfolds on a planet where humans coexist with insect-like beings called Tlics. These Tlics have established a relationship with humans for generations, but this arrangement comes at a price: the insertion of Tlic eggs into human bodies. That ensures peace over the planet. “Bloodchild” explores and illuminates the relationship between these two species. The short story delves into the emotional complications of the relationship between species. Bloodchild tells the tale of Gan, a boy from Earth, and his relationship with T’Gatoi, a female Tlic who acts as his protector and is responsible for implanting Tlic eggs inside him. Gan has emotions about this arrangement. He understands that it’s necessary for the survival of his people but grapples with the physical and emotional implications of carrying Tlic eggs. Gan, later in the story, has to make the decision whether himself or his sister shall undergo this process.

“Bloodchild” illustrates the compromises individuals and societies are willing to make to thrive in a challenging and unfamiliar environment. It also explores themes of choice and personal agency as Gan faces a decision concerning his future and that of his people. Bloodchild ultimately is a fictional story that can help us understand real-world issues, one of them being the educational system. In the story, it is made clear there is conflict between both parties as the Terrans have invaded the homeworld of the Tlic in order to escape the tyranny of their own people. This resulted in a bitter conflict between the two groups until an agreement was eventually made in order to create a more peaceful society, but this agreement also constructed the societal norms that dictate the relationship between both groups of people. In the agreement, the Terrans were expected to; devote one offspring to the reproduction of Terrans and one to the reproduction of Tlic through the process of implantation, were barred from utilizing certain technology such as guns or motor vehicles, and were required to stay in a space known as the Preserve. Implantation is the reproductive process of the Tlic in which a host animal is injected by the ovipositor of a Tlic with eggs which are harbored within the body until they become larvae. At this stage, they must be “surgically” removed from the body of their host before the host is completely consumed. The Tlic are also expected to not use the Terrans like a commodity but more as a prized possession, which was a privilege to own. If all of these requirements are met, the Terrans are allowed to inhabit the Preserve, where they would be safe from inhumane actions such as being separated from their family.

The new societal expectations set forth by this new agreement allowed for the birth of a more collaborative relationship between the two groups rather than one based on competition and dictatorship. Although this tended to be the norm, there were moments that may have challenged the new relationship, one being the case of Lomas. Lomas was a Terran who was implanted with the eggs of T’Khotgif, but when he needed the eggs to be removed, his Tlic wasn’t present to perform the surgery. T’Gatoi was required to perform an emergency surgery requiring Gan’s aid in order to do so. Gan wasn’t aptly informed of how the removal of eggs actually happened and was filled with horror and disgust when he witnessed it. Due to the absence of his Tlic, Lomas felt lost and scared as he possessed little control over his own situation. Likely, this reflects the sentiments of students in a learning environment where “ungrading” doesn’t exist. More accurately, it embodies the fear of receiving a poor letter grade and is only compounded by the fear of how one poor letter grade would affect the future. “The debate over how education should be handled is a lengthy, complex scholarly conversation that has stood for a hundred years” (Stommel). It has long been defined by the fret of a student to maintain a certain letter grade rather than engaging in the educational process of the class. A recent movement known as “ungrading” has sought to move away from a number defining a student, and towards the engagement in the course as a definition of the student’s progress. This helps to resolve one major issue in the educational system, the friction created between students and teachers, forming their relationship into more of a collaborative one rather than a competing one

To further unpack Stommel’s educational proposal, ungrading is an educational approach that challenges the traditional grading systems. Instead of assigning grades based on standard assessment, ungrading focuses on feedback, exploration, reflection and a better understanding of a student’s progress. When Stommel refers to the benefits of ungrading, he is not suggesting that every student should get an “A” or just having everyone earn the same grade at the end of the year. Stommel recognizes that there are many different ways grades can be influenced by factors that are out of a student’s control such as race, gender, or wealth of parents. These differences may cause a shift in perspective between a professor and student on various subject matter within a course. The subjective opinion of one should not have an effect on the success of another, which is explored in the system of “ungrading”. Professors have always debated on what the most effective ways to score students are and there has been an increase in moving away from standardized tests, especially since many colleges no longer require scores, such as SATs, to be sent in or considered for a decision. 

One of Stommel’s alternatives to our current system is contract grading. “Contract Grading” is an archetype of the new idea of “ungrading” in which a professor lays out specific expectations of the student which clearly define the grade a student will receive dependent on the completion of the aforementioned expectations. This allows students to directly affect the letter grade they will receive without the stress of one largely weighted assessment ruining their average. The Tlic and Terrans’ arrangement is set up so that both parties are aware of what is expected from each other and must fulfill their part of the arrangement so that both species can continue to live peacefully in coexistence. This agreement, as previously stated, required the Terrans to bear the offspring of the next generation, prohibited the possession of firearms and/or motor vehicles, and required Terrans to remain within the bounds of the Preserve while the Tlic were only required to treat the Terrans humanely. Under his research, Stommel suggests, “Grading contracts convey expectations about what is required for each potential grade. Students work toward the grade they want to achieve, and the goalposts don’t unexpectedly shift,”(Stommel). This further expresses the previous idea that students, under this system, are able to have greater control over their own outcome or success, dually causing a decrease in unneeded stress. This is traced back to “Bloodchild”, in which the format of the Tlic/Terran contract is similar to what an agreement under contract grading would look like as the professor, or Tlic, is given more power in the way of determining the expectations and the outcome of the student or Terran, is determined by their ability to fulfill the requirements.

In biology, mutualism is a symbiotic relationship in which both species benefit. For example, bees and flowers are two different species however they fit their roles and benefit each other whether it’s pollination for the flower. In a sense this is applicable to humankind, although we’re the same species, we have different roles in society and we have to find ways to work together. In the educational system professors and students have two different roles, however they’re able to benefit from each other. Students can gain valuable knowledge and grades from professors and professors can gain insight from students and make valuable connections with them. To make the two different roles closer, a system of grading has to be established. Students ultimately need grades and how they get them is a system itself. There are benefits and drawbacks to the system of ungrading. This process of ungrading and the concept of it in the school environment is something that has been brought up in question for a long time. Many professors have started to implement this way of teaching and are determining if this style is something that they want to stick with. Students have shown the ideas of risks and rewards through this in many ways. Having students not receive grades for the work they are doing allows them to get less caught up on that and more on the learning process and seeing if they really comprehend the material. Having students put too much of a worry on grades can stray them from their actual learning. This usually leads to the student forgetting the material right after they are needed to use it. Although, the system of no grades can also be a bad thing for students. Some may see that since they aren’t being graded, they put less work and effort into knowing it won’t matter to their grades. This is a tough style of teaching and can either be very beneficial or very bad for the students’ growth and should be felt out to learn if it is the right fit for the right class. 

It is important to create a safe and inclusive space for students and faculty. By doing so we move up the scale towards subjectivity, human relationships, and care to assure successful student and faculty performance. Grades provide a benchmark for how well a student is doing in school, but they don’t determine your value or what you can achieve. They only represent one part of your skills and hard work in a certain situation. The way we grade can affect power dynamics in the student-teacher relationship, creating a hierarchy based on academic performance. Although Gan and T’Gatoi’s relationship is not based on the education system they do face a power hierarchy. Tlic are viewed as the dominant between the two. Like teachers, the Tlic control and set rules for the Terrans. Gan struggles with this similarly to students who receive lower grades might suffer from stress or anxiety compared to those who excel and feel empowered. It’s crucial for educators to foster an inclusive environment that values diverse strengths and supports all students, regardless of grades. An ungrading approach will foster a collaborative and supportive relationship between the two. It encourages open communication, reduces the pressure associated with traditional grading, and allows a focus on understanding and improvement rather than just performance. This approach promotes a deeper engagement with the subject matter and encourages students to take risks and learn from their mistakes without the fear of grading consequences. There are various ways to show your skills and qualities beyond grades. The reason for the set of established laws between the Tlic and Terrans is to minimize the unbalance of power dynamics between the two species. This allows for successful performance between the two and the safe, inclusive coexistence that promotes growth rather than hindrance by both parties.

“A world that isn’t your own”

Bloodchild Essay Final Draft

Octavia Butler’s short story “Bloodchild”explores and illuminates the risks and rewards of coming of age. Main character Gan and his family are Terrans who have settled on an alien-like planet and live alongside the Tlic, alien-like creatures. In the text it describes T’Gatoi the Tlic that lives with Gans family with “bones-ribs, a long spine, a skull and four sets of limb bones per segment” (pg 9). Despite their differences the relationship has been around for generations, helping one another ensure their survival. The Tlic protect and offer the Terrans a place to live in exchange for a place to implant their eggs. Undergoing the implantation of a Tlic egg is seen as a gruesome process, in order for this a Terran must be cut open in the abdomen. Gan shares a negative experience of this when he has to witness and help another Terran, he explains it as “I felt as though I were helping her torture him, helping her consume him, I knew I would vomit soon…”(pg15). Gan was chosen and prepared since birth to undergo this experience but after what he sees he is unsure. He is forced to make the tough decision of sacrificing himself or his sister. His story brings us through this fast process of growing up and how he navigates through this important phase with confidence and resilience. Gan’s responses and actions to the challenging decision help T’Gatoi better understand and connect with him. This new level of connection could benefit the future Tlic and Terrans relationships that will eventually go through the same experiences. Similar to “Bloodchild” there is no escaping growing up in the world we live in today, it is a part of life and a change that everyone experiences. Talking more openly about growing up and the challenges it entails, we can create a supportive environment that helps young people navigate through this important phase of life with confidence and resilience.

Upon arriving at Geneseo, I came to the realization that the night before my arrival could have been seen as my final night of childhood. Attending college is a significant milestone or turning point in most lives. In some cases it’s an expectation, in others it’s a choice. For me college has been a targeted goal throughout my life. I wanted to explore a different environment other than my small hometown, to get out there, meet new people and experience new things was a big goal of mine and I knew college would do just that. Almost everything I have done, clubs, sports, volunteer work, etc has been in preparation for college. My parents had high standards and pushed me to step out of my comfort zone. In my eyes going to college marks the transition from adolescence to adulthood. It’s typically the first time many individuals live away from their parents or guardians. This new level of independence includes making decisions about academics, personal life, finances and relationships. I am responsible for managing my own schedule, attending classes, completing assignments and handling various aspects of daily life without the influence of my parents. As I try to create here what Butler terms as “a livable space” in “a world that isn’t your own” I will come across many risks and rewards. Having the freedom to make these decisions could come with risks, making the wrong choices could put you or others in danger. Although there are risks, the coming of age experience also offers numerous rewards and opportunities. Self development is one such benefit, allowing individuals to discover their authentic selves through the formation of relationships that contribute to the cultivation of inner strength and independence.

Gan and I have similar coming of age stories because they both mark significant transitions to adulthood. His transition involves accepting his responsibilities in the Tlic society. From a young age he was expected to host the eggs of T’Gatoi. In the text it states “I’m told I was first caged within T’Gatoi’s many limbs only three minutes after my birth” (pg.8). Gans expectations in life were set as early as his birth when he was chosen for this role by his mother. Gan faces risks and rewards in his role. He gets benefits like his family living in the preserve and receiving eggs for longer life, but risks his health during the egg implantation. The way Gan handles this responsibility from his family is similar to the way I handled the expectation of attending college from mine. I have been raised my whole life, from as early as kindergarten to my final years of high school in preparation to attend college. My family had all attended college and it was an expectation that I did too. Like Gan I made tough decisions in order to pursue this goal and expectation. I remember trying out for teams where I knew not a single person, I would commit a lot of my time and miss out on a lot of things. It was a tough decision but I chose to sacrifice that to get better in order to reach my goal of playing collegiate lacrosse. This experience guided me for this transition, I came into college with the knowledge that it’s okay to be uncomfortable or overwhelmed and that with time things get better. I have also had a job since my first year of highschool. Working four times a week, some even school nights helped me learn time management. I would attend school, go to the gym, attend work and still find time for homework and studying. This skill is very beneficial for college and my future overall giving me confidence and resilience in managing my time beneficially. With that being said my reward would be getting to be here furthering my education and self growth. Being on my own and having the freedom to control my own responsibilities will help me mature and find myself at the next level which in my eyes is seen as a passage into adulthood. My risk of this expectation could be putting my body in danger. Without the guidance or control of my parents in this new place, I could make poor decisions, not getting enough sleep, consuming something I should not have or even an injury I don’t take care of could all result in putting my body in danger.

Another example of how Gans coming of age story is similar to mine is we both have built relationships. In the text it states “and to keep you for myself, I said, it was so, I didn’t understand it but it was so” (pg 28). Gans relationship with T’Gatoi is central to this story. They share a bond that is both intimate and fraught with tension. On the one hand, there is a reward for the trust and affection between them, as T’Gatoi genuinely cares for Gan’s well-being and vice versa, like in the quote Gan comes to the realization that he would take on T’Gatoi’s eggs not someone else because he wanted her for himself. On the other hand, there is a risk for the power dynamics in their relationship, stemming from the biological control the Tlic have over humans, creating a sense of unease and dependence. The Tlic seem to have more control, they have made rules such as guns being illegal because of an incident in the past where a Terran used one on an Tlic. The way Gan built a relationship is closely related to the way I have developed mine. Coming into college, I knew I would have to say goodbye to my friends and family, not forever but I knew it would not be the same when I got back. A risk of this could be homesickness, maybe even anxiety and depression, if this becomes serious it could also affect one’s health. Leaving behind people who make you who you are and who are a part of your everyday life can be a very difficult transition. College can also create many new relationships. Building relationships with peers, professors, and mentors could open up connections which will shape your future. Reaching out or becoming close to a professor can help them see and understand what you are as a person and what you are feeling. This could be seen as a reward for getting out in the world, learning about different cultures and diversities, getting used to being outside your comfort zone which allows you to grow as an individual.

“Bloodchild” serves as a thought-provoking exploration of the journey from adolescence to adulthood, mirroring the challenges and rewards faced by both the characters in the story and students like myself entering college. Just as Gan navigates a complex relationship with the Tlic, we too will embark on a new chapter filled with risks and rewards. The transition to college symbolizes the end of our childhood, with newfound independence and responsibilities. This freedom carries risks, as the choices we make can impact our well-being and future. Yet, it also brings opportunities for self-discovery and personal growth, allowing us to shape our identities and build relationships that contribute to our inner strength. Growing up is a fundamental part of human life, there is no avoiding it. By talking more openly about growing up and the challenges it entails, we can create a supportive environment that helps young people navigate through this important phase of life with confidence and resilience. It also allows adults to better understand and connect with the younger generation. Like T’Gatoi and Gan, the mutual understanding between generations promotes respect, cooperation and shared wisdom, benefiting everyone involved.